I’m learning a lot about being more detailed in my storyline

“I had my session with my screenwriting mentor the other day. This time my treatment looked much better. I’ve learned I need to have someone else read my stuff before I turn it in, to get an outsiders perspective. I still need to make a few changes, but all in all this went over much better. I’m learning a lot about being more detailed in my storyline. One thing that has made me feel good in all this is Ron telling me that I have a natural ability in something that is not easily learned. Phew! That’s really good to hear!”